The Valley || ONC2023
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Bhairavi, a staunch devotee of Shree Ram, is a tourist visiting Kashmir with her daughter. One night she is going through the pictures she has clicked during the day and stumbles across one that shocks her to the core. It's the picture of a girl Bhairavi knows has been dead for almost a year. Scared yet wanting to uncover the truth, she decides to look into the matter and discovers something she couldn't have imagined in her wildest nightmares.
Written for ONC India.
Prompt No. 26
Rating: Suitable for all ages
Start date: 16th February 2023
Date completed: 30th March 2023
Original story written for Wattpad by @GandalfofspaceAnli Β© 2023
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