Star Wars; the Terran Commander
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Last published Mon, Aug 25, 2025
Inspired by @BattleDroid1106 for his story the Unusual commander.
John Ross was a normal person and Marine officer who was a huge Fan of Star Wars, most particularly the CIS as he felt that they were in the right as the Republic was corrupted and turn into the Empire and the New Republic didn't do anything except reopen new wounds. but he was accidently woke up in the Star Wars universe. Now, arm with the foresight and mastering his tactical prowess, as well as new friends, will he lead the CIS to their rightful place, or will the collapse become the same?
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