The Trials of Honor; PickPocket

A throne is being sought after. Morals are being pushed. The true meaning of honor is being tried. Two realms, one of magic and wonder, the other of inventions and discovery, are on the brink of war. The only thing stopping them is four children. One being a prince running from the crown, another, a future royal advisor who does not know the world, the third, a thief who wants to give more than take, and the last, a mage who fears change and the unknown.

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