If Looks could kill
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Ongoing8m
Last published Thu, Jun 27, 2013
BANG' The sudden noise ripped me from my thoughts. I looked through the crack so I could try to see what was going on. I was to curios to not look and just close the door. But at the same time I was to scared to leave the closet. 'BANG' This time A image came with the sound. Only seconds after the noise blood splatter over the T.V, the walls, and the family pictures. I couldn't help it. It was natural instinct. I screamed. I quickly slammed my hand over my mouth hoping and praying that whoever was out there didn't here my screams as I knew my patents weren't cruel enough to kill someone. But of course they heard it. How could they not? After all it was silent in the house. Dead silent. The door was yanked open. The man that stood before me was dressed in all black. He wore a black mask as well as black leather gloves, and black combat boots. He smiled. It was the most evil smile I've ever seen. His face was covers in my parents blood. He grabbed me by my hair and yanked me out of the closet. He dragged me to the couch. Ignoring my screams for help he tossed me into it. "Your so beautiful."
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