The Box Of Pompeii

This is a short story I wrote for an English essay, It's not too long, I uploaded it here in hope to get some feed back.

I'm not going to reveal much about his story because It would just spoil everything. So if you're willing to spend a five minutes to read a story about a girl named Pandy, this story is for you.

I hope you enjoy)

Ps: it's my first time uploading something I wrote!!! 😊