The Jingle Jangler

Jimmy and Henry are sneaking into their school in hopes of catching a monster on camera. But they never expected it to actually be real.

As with all my stories, feedback and criticisms are greatly appreciated! Anything you give me can help me write stories better to your liking in the future. Because I want to eventually write stories that get sold in book stores (yes I'm old) I really want to learn as much as I possibly can from all of my writing. So please, don't hold back. Don't worry about my feelings. I want to learn and I can't do that without feedback. Even if you just think my story is trash, that helps me to know!

This short story is one of the longer one's I've written. It focuses on a monster of my own imagination that I first created when I was burnt out from back to back Computer Science and Calculus finals. I'm really excited to do more with him as a monster, our protagonists, and other monsters that I come up with. This kind of horror is probably my favorite of all time, so I hope to write more stories like this!