A Man In The Rain

A Man In The Rain

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The story is a poignant tale of a man struggling with personal problems and the kindness of a stranger who helps him through his difficulties. It is told in five parts, each revealing a new layer of the man's troubles and his slow journey towards healing. The setting is a rainy, dreary city, which serves as a metaphor for the man's emotional state. The rain is a constant presence throughout the story, emphasizing the man's feelings of isolation and despair. The protagonist is a sympathetic figure, with deep lines etched into his face and weariness in his eyes. He is lost and forlorn, standing on a street corner in the rain when the narrator first sees him. As the story progresses, we learn about his personal problems, which include losing his job, his wife leaving him, and drowning in debt. The stranger who helps him is kind and empathetic, offering him an umbrella during a downpour and listening to his problems. Despite the man's initial reluctance, they strike up a conversation, and the stranger becomes a source of support for him. The man's turning point comes when he lashes out at the stranger, confessing his feelings of self-loathing and shame. This moment serves as a breakthrough for him, as he opens up about his past and begins to take steps towards recovery. The story ends on a hopeful note, with the man making progress in his personal and professional life. He thanks the stranger for helping him and expresses his gratitude for the support and kindness he received. The story is a testament to the power of human connection and the impact that one person can have on another's life.
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She wanted to die. He wanted to live. ••• A hand grabbed onto my wrist, yanking me back just as the train rushed past, before I'd even had time to comprehend whether or not I'd carry out the action. I stumbled back into the person's chest, my heart jumping out as I swivelled around, startled to find myself staring into piercing dark brown eyes. "Were you going to jump?!" "No," I drawled out sarcastically, ignoring the intensity of his eyes as they bore into my own, "I just stand on the edge of train platforms at midnight because I feel like it." Seeing the stranger tense, I stepped away from the edge, feeling his hand let go of mine as I picked up my bag before moving to sit down on one of the platform benches. Letting out an evident sigh of relief, he sat down after tentative movements towards me, and I could feel his intense gaze raking across my features. His eyes never left me, I was sure of it, with every step both he and I had taken. "Are you okay?" He had asked warily, apparent apprehension in his deep voice while he spoke, "Do you want to talk about it?" "What's there to talk about?" I threw his question back at him, watching him study me for a few critical moments before his potent gaze switched to our surroundings. "I did just watch you nearly kill yourself; that might be a place to start?" ••• She didn't expect for a complete stranger to stop her milliseconds away from committing suicide. She didn't expect him to be so kindhearted and patient. He didn't expect to stop her from jumping in front of a train the first time they met. He didn't expect to find himself falling for the one girl he knew he shouldn't. [Word Count: 180,000 - 200,000]

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