Vampire Agent (English Version)

Vampire Agent (English Version)

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The english version of my original german book :) ------------------------------ A little vampire thriller with ups and downs. ------------------------------ Small reading sample: ...One more step. And another step. Then I had a loose pipe in my field of vision. One step to the left, toward the wall of the house. I reached out slowly, the ghoul hissed and growled. And when I was about to grab the pipe, he jumped off. Immediately I rushed to the makeshift weapon, dodged the leap, and smashed the steel against the monster's jaw with full momentum. I didn't wait, jumped onto the fire escape, the pipe still in my hand, and climbed up light-footedly. At the moment when I was about to swing over the parapet, a terrible stinging in my verse caused a cry on my part. Claws dug into the flesh under my right ankle, slid between the tendons and pulled me back down with added weight.... ------------------------------- I look forward to suggestions for improvement that could add even more quality to the book ;) So criticism gladly welcome! (Since I have only revised the main story for now, there may be occasional careless mistakes. Feel free to comment on the paragraph, should you find one. I usually don't bother with grammar improvements ;)) Have fun reading!
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