Mech
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In this world, superpowers are a reality, not a fantasy. Humans can have super strength, telekinesis, fire manipulation, you name it. Some sync better with the Mech Gloves, the new technology that gives ordinary people extraordinary abilities, than others. This is the case for Coal. He is destroys all his competition in the street Mech Fights all over the country. One day, though, he his given the chance to participate in the International Mech Tournament, a grueling competition in which the best of the best fight for the grand prize of 5 billion dollars. That's enough money for Coal's mom to get the surgery she needs. The only problem is, many have been known to be seriously injured or even killed in this tournament. Should Coal take the risk? - Hey guys, I just want to know if you think there's potential in the story, or if I should just stop. Please comment thoughts.
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a Long time Ago there was a Boy who had a abusive farther, the mother of the Boy couldn't do anything to the Farther due to him being a Government agent. but one day the farther went insane, Killing his Wife and one of his two sons in a Drug fueled rage. but the Boy was angered and managed to kill his Farther, But in doing so his left arm was broken beyond repair. knowing he had killed someone the boy ran away, Living and stealing everything he could to survive. but eventually he realised that the world was like his farther but had the capacity for change so he set his sights to the governments of the world. he was intent on stopping the nuclear arms race and instead making them want to unite in order to stop the production lines. there is three Moments in the boys life where he is trained by a Alien, Got a Prosthetic arm, and most importantly. died with a Bang. But no one actually found a body, all they found was a Strange Black substance where his body should of been. The New world order that took over the Governments place have stories of what happened and that he was still alive, just protecting the earth somehow. Just in another version of earth where the Government is actually the good guys and a Bunch of tall Alien Robots fighting a War on earth. Oh yeah and he was nearly as tall as them, a bit short but still taller then every singular human. (Originally the prologue was to be a For Adoption thing for anyone to take a gander and make a story...I am annoyed it only got 50 Reads. So I'm gonna make it a thing...its gonna be tough but hey I can't let this simmer anymore. I had a whole Element specialised for the OC and everything with a Hidden base he made himself and not to mention a Way to get smaller with a...Very brutal trick. So yeah, imma take a nap and a new part will be out with new tags.)

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