Miraculous Rewrite
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  • Reads 159,991
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  • Parts 139
  • Time 48h 37m
Complete, First published Mar 08, 2023
A rewrite by me of the popular show 'Miraculous: Tales of Ladybug and Cat Noir'.

This is my version of what Miraculous would've been if I had made it.

In this AU, Luka receives the Ladybug Miraculous and becomes the hero, Coccinelle.

Adrien/Chat Noir is treated with the respect he deserves, and Marinette actually faces consequences for her stalker-ish behavior.

Also Lukadrien, because they're the best boys and they both deserve better.

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Basically, these are just a rough drafts as I figure out where I want to go with the story. I need to go through and figure out which episodes are actually necessary since Marinette is no longer the main character. But I figured I'd go through and rewrite each episode anyway, just to see how it would've went.

I use the official transcripts from the episodes as a base, and go on to edit the story from there, which is why it's formatted as a script. So sorry in advance if you don't like that type of formatting, but I might change it if and when I ever get past the rough draft stage.
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