The Sinner and The Saint

Hey guys, I'm trying to get back into writing, I hope you like the first few pages of this new book. If there is anything I can changed or some feedback, please comment.
Thanks
-Mel xox

Fern, is the girl that is always in the background. Always being the girl who would rather stay home than going out like most other girls her age, but one night, her best friend, convinced her that they should go out to the new club that just opened up in town. But what will happen when she ends up at the wrong place at the very wrong time...

Ace, he is taking over what his father business. He was trying to close his very first business deal which went very wrong. He noticed the quiet girl from his school being caught in the middle of his business deal got wrong...