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Last published Sat, Mar 25, 2023
Kasumi stared at him from beneath her cowl, "Look at the Commander, what do you see?"
What did he see?
"She is a warrior, unmatched, truly, she glows on the battle field," Kasumi still held that expectant look in her eye and Thane knew he should give in, "Off the battle field? She's beauty incarnate. I grow weak when she merely glances my way."
"Wow," Kasumi chuckled with a wry smirk, "You're in deep."
Thane agreed. He was in deep and he wanted to drown in her.
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