Trapped in dimensions: Magolor's journey to redemption
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A story of a trickster who gets karma for his actions, getting sent to literal hell and tries to find a way out to apologize to his friends. But he's not the only thing that's down here as he'll be fighting enemies left and right just to make it out alive, and maybe even finding a friend to confine in his problems.
This story has spoilers of Magolor's epilogue, Kirby's return to dreamland deluxe, Kirby Star Allies, Kirby Planet Robobot, and general knowledge of Kirby lore with me sprinkling some obscure facts in Kirby miiverse posts. It's best to get familiar with those titles as I add some things that aren't in canon and It'll be helpful to distinguish the difference between canon and fanon. (This is my first fanfic so apologies if there are any grammar mistakes, I'll be fixing them.)
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