,,Don't open your eyes..."

,,Don't open your eyes..."

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WpMetadataNoticeLast published Mon, Oct 9, 2023
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It's some kind of survival story when a class, which was supposed to go on a last school trip together by unexplained events. The driver seemed to lose Control over the bus and fall. Of course he didn't survive as the bus crushed. As it wasn't enough, all the electronical equipment they had didn't work and they weren't able to call for help. The student were all on theyir own. They were in the unknown place pretty close to the milk factory on the other side of the road Out of helplessness, some decided to look out for some living souls in the factory with the thought of being able to return home safely. Little did they know, it's going to be their last trip ever...ever... I Really hope you will like it. It will be my first story and i don't really have experience in writing so sorry for all the mistakes or some events out of blue.
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