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Hazler, A seemingly perfect place with a dark plot twist is a place that has been secluded from the world for 2 decades. This is also where the story of a bunch of confused and rowdy teenagers takes place.


Follow Azalea, a normal teenager with an almost too perfect life who loses her best friend to murder and finds out a dark secret about the town she grew up in. That is when she and a few others go on a dangerous journey to catch the killer and rid the town of the secret it has been holding for way too long.

 My eyes widened as her frail body was lifted and carefully put into the body bag leaving me dumbstruck. My voice was stuck in my throat and I barely managed to whisper to Ben "What is going on?" His pitiful eyes turned to my horror struck ones as he explained  "Someone broke into Louise's house at some point in the night and well you don't need to be Einstein to figure out what happened next.All Rights Reserved

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Miss Marvelous: Chaotic Summer by MichelleT530

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Chasing Casey by LaurenJ22

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Emerald Summer by aAAAXxxxx

((Completed)) I stay on the floor. I sit staring at the bedroom door for hours, seething with anger at myself. The more I think the angrier I get. I know anger won't get me anywhere, especially here, except maybe dead. Still, I sit enraged. The whole house is silent. It's probaby the most quiet it's ever been. Normally it would soothe me, but the fact I had been sitting here almost all day now turned the quiet afternoon silence into fuel for my fire. I look over at Jade who had barely moved at all. I wish I could protect her. She came back for me even though I told her not to. There's not realy anything I can do though. Maybe I could make some kind of deal? No. That's what got us here in the first place. Then again it really can't get much worse. I have to try something or else I don't know what will happen to her. I mean she's the toughest person I know. Everyone has a breaking point and I don't want to see her get to that place. I'm already the worst friend ever, all I do is make things worse. I stare at the wall and pace the room for a few more hours. When's he getting back? I need to get out of this room and talk to him. ----- Sheri and her bestfriend, Jade, find themselves kidnapped by a sociopathic sadist named Todd during a road trip to Minnesota. To make things worse, Sheri and Jade both know no one's looking for them. They're on their own. It's a mess they can't possibly get out of, alive.

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Her Revenge by actb4thinking

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