Zenear's Tyrrant

Hello there! this is a test book for a story idea i have so plz give me feedback. Description: Once upon a time there was a kingdom named Zenear, now this kingdom was pretty good and all of its residences were happy, untill the royal famliy was murdered by a mysterious woman called herself Trixy, who had magical powers like no other, which meant everyone was powerless against her so she became queen and oh was she a cruel one, ever since she took the throne, she ruled with an iron fist and she made everyone work so hard, that lots of people would pass out from pure exostion, she was so curel in fact the the people of Zenear would cry out into the night "Please devine spirits for this world, send us a savior to end our suffering!" little did they know the spirts had already sent a savior. . .or maybe three. . . James Harison a strong, youngman with a heart of gold, and he, along with his two friends Oliva Pocker, and Alexzander Trido were determined to save their home from this tyrrant. Haha see what I did there? So enjoy or not.