Blank Eyes

A girl who lives with a sadistic witch, called her mother. She see the future and is taken advantage of until she learns to stand up for her self.

His eyes where fixed on me searching what he could see of my face before I ducked in the crowd and ran to my train. Hiding in front of a cuddling couple, I hoped that neither of the men could see where I was heading. I could still feel those emerald eyes on me, I hope I see him again.
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This is my first book. based on nothing real at all. I am constantly adding and editing the chapters.
Any tips will be great. I'm not a true writer. I suck at writing anything but I'm doing this to get out of my comfort zone. Thank you for reading if you are.