Jake's Secret
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Last published Tue, Jun 14, 2011
When Raine's brother, Jake, commits suicide, it tears her to pieces. Her loving, honest, amazing, brother? Suicide? The two words DO NOT MATCH. Especially when she finds a note under his bed.
And it reads that he was murdered.
Suddenly, Raine is thrown in an already boiling mystery to solve the truth behind her brother's death. But what she discovers completely shatters her perspective. How many secrets DID her brother have? How many more will she unravel? Raine finds out that maybe there is more to the surface of reality than the whole word believes.
And what DOES a baby, a tattoo, a building, a boy, a note, and a man all have in common? One big secret.
Jake's Secret.
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