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The Great Stallion (DISCO. BEING REWRITTEN)

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Hi everyone!

SHit! it's been a while!

I last updated this book in 2019 and then i gave up on it.

I pondered deleting the book and never touching it again but last night i was reading some of the chapters and fck! this book is terrible!

I love the plot idea i had but 17-year-old me was too immature to even attempt writing this.

So, 26-year-old me is going to attempt rewriting it... 

its going to take some time but i already rewrote the first chapter and i really like it.

SO, I'm going to leave this book up for those who want to reminisce, but you can join me in the NEW VERSION of The Great Stallion

Which I think I will rename     "KOALAK" which apparently is 'Healer' in dothraki or i might leave the title the same. 

Help me in the comments to decide

'Koalak'   or   'The Great Stallion'

i hope you guys are having a good day. And i will see you August 4th with the first chapter to the new version of this book.

TTYL Orelie.

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Isis is a girl with the power to repel all sickness. Her mother, before dying, wanted to name all her children after Greek Gods.

Being from one of the most ancient and mystical family,the Odarys, Isis quickly developed a power. She got it from  her great grand mother, who was a healer. She could take any illness and make it disappear.

Iris, the sister of Isis, was really jealous of her. She was the only girl with light brown hair. All of the Odarys has dark ebony hair.
The peasants thought that she was the moat beautiful daughters of Braxton Odarys.
Mars was the oldest brother of Isis and Iris. He thought that to  
have pure bloodline,he had to marry one of his sisters.
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Mistaken Identity (Old Version) ✔

Kalliyah's twin sister, Alliyah decides to have an affair with an older man. The affair led to Alliyah getting pregnant. After couple months of taking care of the child, she suggest that motherhood wasn't for her, her career as a model was more important. Alliyah abandons her baby at Alexander Cater's office. Alexander is her old lover only child. What happens when Kalliyah is mistaken for her sister, Alliyah and is forced to take care of Alliyah's child, Henrique? Kalliyah being the humble girl that she is, decide to move in with Alexander, Henrique's older brother to help take care of the child. Living in a house where the owner and housekeeper hates you can be a hand full. As Kalliyah time extend she realize that Alex is not as bad as she thought. Will the two fall in love? Or will Alex still believe that Kalliyah is truly Alliyah, the mother of Henrique. "Well since we are confessing I have a major thing for dimples. I just love the formation." I smiled. "Really," he came down on the ground and was now only inches away from me. "Guess what?" he asked me in a joyful manne r. "What?" I asked curious, though I had a feeling what he's thinking. He moved in closer to me and whispered, "I have dimples." I held my breath to how close he is to me and to his scent, his manly, hypnotizing scent. His eyes then scan my face until they landed on my lips. He stared at them, wanting them to come closer, closer to his. But I was too weak to move into him and he noticed this. So he moved his lips closer. They gently touch mines. Xoxox Lots of Love to KimoyaDotorg'who made this wonderful cover. You guys can check her out, she has some books herself. P.S This book is unedited so read at your own risk, there are a lot of errors. So if you're going to read and be judgmental wait until its edited, please and thanks.