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Orelie_1
Ongoing, First published Mar 03, 2015
Mature
gameofthroneskhaldrogoromancetribewarriors
Hi everyone!

SHit! it's been a while!

I last updated this book in 2019 and then i gave up on it.

I pondered deleting the book and never touching it again but last night i was reading some of the chapters and fck! this book is terrible!

I love the plot idea i had but 17-year-old me was too immature to even attempt writing this.

So, 26-year-old me is going to attempt rewriting it... 

its going to take some time but i already rewrote the first chapter and i really like it.

SO, I'm going to leave this book up for those who want to reminisce, but you can join me in the NEW VERSION of The Great Stallion

Which I think I will rename     "KOALAK" which apparently is 'Healer' in dothraki or i might leave the title the same. 

Help me in the comments to decide

'Koalak'   or   'The Great Stallion'

i hope you guys are having a good day. And i will see you August 4th with the first chapter to the new version of this book.

TTYL Orelie.

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Isis is a girl with the power to repel all sickness. Her mother, before dying, wanted to name all her children after Greek Gods.

Being from one of the most ancient and mystical family,the Odarys, Isis quickly developed a power. She got it from  her great grand mother, who was a healer. She could take any illness and make it disappear.

Iris, the sister of Isis, was really jealous of her. She was the only girl with light brown hair. All of the Odarys has dark ebony hair.
The peasants thought that she was the moat beautiful daughters of Braxton Odarys.
Mars was the oldest brother of Isis and Iris. He thought that to  
have pure bloodline,he had to marry one of his sisters.
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"Maybe she's born with it." But no one is , you give a price for what you gain , sometimes the price can be hefty. _____________________________ "Who you Smurfs are talking about ?" He started to ponder after hearing his siblings conversation "Na-Nothing, just about so-someone who reminded me of you while I got lost in the party " "say more " "It doesn't requires your attention, Brother " " I don't think so, It intrigues me , you continue ." °°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°° "Spill it out " she said with her emotionless voice " I want you to marry one of my best friend's son " "Shit" someone muttered as a whisper "Ohh ok , then what else my dear daddy want me to do for you ? Huh ? " they were able to see only a slight change of expression on her face , for the first time in the past few weeks , since they met her again . •••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••• She only knows about abundance and pain . She is powerful , wise and ruthless but has one weakness, her Babies. He knows how to be ruthless,and torture his enemies perfectly but doesn't know about how to handle a soul which has been broken multiple times . Would he be willing to kneel before her just to win her heart? Or perhaps he will the one to break it once again?? __________________________________ They say a person who carries the whole world on their shoulders is the one who gets crushed the most . Some shows their scars but few hide it with Conceler.... However one should try to win one's own battle . <<<<<<>>>>>> This is my first ever book and I don't think there will be someone who will try to copy mine, am I right?? Be good kids . ⚠️WARNING ⚠️ More emotional drama !! LGBTQ content ? may appear.. Mature content ? for sure ! Abuse? A little bit Spicy parts ? Ofcourse

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