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The Great Stallion (DISCO. BEING REWRITTEN)

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Hi everyone!

SHit! it's been a while!

I last updated this book in 2019 and then i gave up on it.

I pondered deleting the book and never touching it again but last night i was reading some of the chapters and fck! this book is terrible!

I love the plot idea i had but 17-year-old me was too immature to even attempt writing this.

So, 26-year-old me is going to attempt rewriting it... 

its going to take some time but i already rewrote the first chapter and i really like it.

SO, I'm going to leave this book up for those who want to reminisce, but you can join me in the NEW VERSION of The Great Stallion

Which I think I will rename     "KOALAK" which apparently is 'Healer' in dothraki or i might leave the title the same. 

Help me in the comments to decide

'Koalak'   or   'The Great Stallion'

i hope you guys are having a good day. And i will see you August 4th with the first chapter to the new version of this book.

TTYL Orelie.

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Isis is a girl with the power to repel all sickness. Her mother, before dying, wanted to name all her children after Greek Gods.

Being from one of the most ancient and mystical family,the Odarys, Isis quickly developed a power. She got it from  her great grand mother, who was a healer. She could take any illness and make it disappear.

Iris, the sister of Isis, was really jealous of her. She was the only girl with light brown hair. All of the Odarys has dark ebony hair.
The peasants thought that she was the moat beautiful daughters of Braxton Odarys.
Mars was the oldest brother of Isis and Iris. He thought that to  
have pure bloodline,he had to marry one of his sisters.
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Destiny Waits for No Man

Keeta was born at the beginning of the Middle Kingdom of Egypt. She was the only daughter of a nobleman that barely made it through. When she turned sixteen years old, her parents gave her to the temples so that maybe one day she could become a powerful priestess and bring good fortune to their family. Keeta didn't mind. Four years into her studies she was noticed by a young man. It was different for her. Never before had any man taken notice of her. He showered her with gifts and rare desert flowers. She wondered why he was so persistent about her even though she was training to become a priestess. Then God Set killed his brother Osiris and his brother's son Horus was out for revenge. Chaos reined down on the mortal plains. The Goddess Isis protected those within her temple the best she could but some worshippers perished due to Set's wrath. All save her. The man that had such affection towards her returned just before the final battle. With everything happening, Keeta didn't realize that the man was actually Set until Isis appeared after he kissed her and revealed him. Isis felt Keeta betrayed her by sleeping with the man who killed her husband. Before Set could stop her, Isis branded Keeta with the Symbol of Eternal Life cursing her. After, Horus banned Set to the Red Desert and for over a century that's where he remained. Keeta walked amongst the mortals and watched as they all perished as she remained the same. It wasn't until after Set was free of the desert did the truth finally come out and by then it was too late. Isis couldn't reverse the curse. Isis then gifted her with an Anubis pup. Amis, the grandson of Set. He aged the same as any God but preferred the look of a pup unless Keeta was in trouble. Then he took on the look of his father along with the powers that came with his full grown self. When he wasn't protecting Keeta, he was often found on his cushy pillow dreaming of sweet donuts.