Broken Girl (sequel) (Under Revision)
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Last published Thu, Jul 23, 2020
It's been 2 years since Evan and I been together, summer coming up will make it 3 years. our relationship is going great. We are officially and finally seniors in College. That's the thing about college no one ever tells you...not everyone actually graduates in 4 years, it's all credit, GPA and Major/minor requirements. Most of us ended up doing an extra year in Uni. it is November 2nd and I was excited and couldn't wait for graduation. My last class was over, I walk to the parking lot and wait for Evan to come out of his class. I see him walking with this girl Melissa, I know he wouldn't cheat on me or anything like that, but I can't help feeling a little jealous. Evan has gotten quite popular on campus, mainly because of football, these past 2 years, him along with jimmy and this new kid that came in last year. Trenton is the campus "hottest guy", he's ridiculously rich, hot-headed and his care-free attitude goes well along with him. Things are going great but as we navigate adulthood, careers, dreams and relationships will things stay the same? or will everything change?
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