Rewriting Fight Scenes
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Ongoing9m
Last published Tue, May 9, 2023
This is a story where I go back to fight scenes from various media that I was unhappy with and rewrite them to fix their flaws. I'll make a better thumbnail later, I'm currently busy but just wanna get this published.
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