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Critical

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Time 4h 34m

Reads 9,275
Votes 162
Parts 23
Time 4h 34m

By 7, Jess was taken in by her grandparents after her parents died.
By 12, she was put into the system when they couldn't take care of her anymore
Now at 16 she's brought to New Jersey to live with her new foster family
But what happens when you're adopted by someone from your favourite childhood band?

adopted by nick jonas :)

!! I don't own any characters besides my OC's !!All Rights Reserved

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Mina is a young 15 year old girl, who has always wanted a family. Her past wasn't terrible, but wasn't the best either. She was still waiting for someone to come and adopt her, foster her, really anything at this point. She only has a few more years, and then she'd be kicked out. So time was everything. That's when Jin and Namjoon come into the picture. Obviously a family always has a few bumps and cracks along the way. But we all make it in the end. ~ This cute cover is by @Ustaethicc ~ {Started: 08/08/19} {Complete: 24/07/20} [Editing in Progress as of - 07/10/20] . . TO NOTE - I was much younger when I wrote this story. I understand that some things may be a tad cringy...trust me, I know. However, this story has definitely helped me become a better writer in the long run. Hence, I rather not take it down (I am TRYING to edit it, or I was...but there's just so much). Thank you to all the people who have supported me through it all and enjoy this story, it means a lot to me~!!