!!!!PLEASE NOTE!! THIS IS A VERY IMPORTANT TO READ BEFORE YOU CONTINUE ON!!!! I got special permission from the creator of this story to re-write the FIRST 5 CHAPTERS OF THEIR STORY! AGAIN, THIS STORY DOES NOT BELONG TO ME! I am trying something out to help them get more views, and I am going to re-write the first 5 chapters in my own writing style. Once, lets say... two months after the last chapter is posted, I am going to take it down. I want your guys help with what you like or dont like about the story in my own writing style, so I can help them achieve more views. Every little note or comment can help them improve their writing. I am going to repeat this in the very first "chapter" of the story; along with a link to their story.All Rights Reserved