Nothing Ever Lasts (Rewrite Demo)

Nothing Ever Lasts (Rewrite Demo)

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A new take on the first novel of the Anti-Hero story line, with updated and polished writing. Expanding and rewriting the story along with adding never before scenes and characterizations with most of the original story beats along the way. This is not the official canon novel, however I'd like to think of it as an alternative universe. You might recognize some things, and see new ones as well. This is also a test for the audience to see how my writing has improved over the years. See which one does best. This is a demo, and will only be up to eight chapters before the main plot of the story unfolds. So if this gets enough traction and if people like this version more, then I'll continue writing it and make this one the canon version instead. (This would also make it a rewrite for Secrets of Demise)
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I ,Elena, am an ordinary high school girl.I am so into novels and I finally found my favourite one just a few days ago! It was a mafia one! When I saw it at the book store,I just couldn't resist the temptation so I bought it.I got home and started reading it. "Eh?!The second male lead dies to protect the heroine?!" The second male lead, Endymion, was the childhood friend of the heroine.He always had a crush on her but never expresssed his romantic feelings.He was so kind to the heroine and protected her from afar. "He got shot to protect her and died without even revealing his true feelings?! This is so unfair author-sama!"I screamed at the book right in front of me. "I had enough of this! Endymion should get his happy ending as well!" Suddenly,I saw a light coming from inside the book."What the?"I opened it. "Do you wish to save second male lead?" Is this for real? A yes and no appeared in front of me.I tapped on "yes"."Do as you wish but under a condition... Never fall for the second male lead" "What?!I have a huge crush on him already?! What are you talking about?!" " -_-"appeared on the book. It went silent for a bit but a new message appeared. "Then never admit your feelings for the second male lead to him." [...] "I accept." 📌 Note‼️: the picture does not belong to me.I took the picture from Google. I wrote this because I was bored of the classic mafia with a naive fl and can do it all ml. I also didn't include too much love triangle , double faced people and unessasary drama.

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