Royalty

You are in the magical technologically advenced continent named Alerin. Young Mark Anderson who fought in the war for his empire is now city guard of city Adria. Its just another day but Mark soon enough realizes that everything in his life is about to change. New city guard captain is making drastic changes in city and Marks adventure is starting. The adventure of love and betrayal, war and peace, light and darkness and soon enough with close encounter in political game and royal family.

Hi im bluewolf11224211 and here is my ever first swritten story. Its really my first ever story so please take that in mind. Im not native english speaker so there can be found some of gramatic mistakes, please feel free to inform me about them and i will fix them.

This story is incomplete, it is now based just from four pages. I would say its kinda beta story or something like that. Its very possible that story will be remade like some pages completelly rewriten or some characters changed

Im very open to your oppinions, like what do you think was good or not, what should i improve or stop doing to make this writing more enjoyable for you guys.

Ok that's all from me and i hope you will enjoy the story. Have great day!