Where the Eyes are Drawn

This is a story that takes place in three different perspectives. An egotistical artist, A spiteful office worker, and a self righteousness private investigator. All three perspectives interact with each other in a way that is meant to be show an inherent blindness to each of them.

I wanted to dip my toes into writing a narrative. Previously I had only written in first person to convey ideas and thoughts in a flawed manner but I really wanted to attempt multiple characters with relationships that change as the story progresses. I think there might be some fat that could be cut but overall I'm proud of my creative application of this idea.

Thoughts and feedback are always appreciated.