OVERCOMING A DISABILITY

this story is about a girl who gets criticized by many people for not being a fast learner, even her own parents. But then she shocks them all by becoming one of the best neurosurgeon in the country.Please read my story and tell me how you think i can improve. This is my first time posting here. I love writing and I do it for fun,but now I want to share it with the world. Please don't hesitate to correct me and tell me how I can improve and the topics you this'll I can write on. Thank you all and hope you have fun reading my story.