Breathe
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I remember when we were young, not much older than the age of nine, and we explored the unknown path of the river near his uncles house. I remember him leading me up a path of rocks that we climbed as I tightly held onto his hand feeling afraid to look down as we became further away from the ground. I can still feel the warm suns rays that peeked through the treetops as my bare feet hit the rough jagged surfaces of the rocks. I still remember hearing the loud crashing of water when he whispered a small, "Look." In my ear cause me to open my eyes and see the clean aquamarine water fall and crash down onto many rocks beneath the majestic waterfall, as the water twinkles from the bright rays of the soft warm sun. I can still feel the happiness I felt that day but now that happiness numbs me due the fact that he's no longer here with me.... (Excerpt from, Breathe.)
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Rejection. Betrayal. Heartbreak. Grief. Unfortunately, we've all had a swallow, some more than others, of this bitter brew. This is just a sliver of my chapter that is a part of this world's grand narrative; it's about one person's toe dipping into the brokenness of the Earth, and the ripples, waves, tsunamis it created in her life. A couple of months ago, while consoling a friend grieving the loss of a relationship, he asked me a question no one had ever asked me before. A very vulnerable and powerful question. I had been sharing some of my own similar experiences with him when he messaged me that life changing question, "And, what did you see at the top of the mountain?" While his words were just letters on a screen, I could see the hunger in his eyes, hear the desperation in his voice, sense the overwhelming thirst of a person climbing up an incredibly steep and treacherous mountain. What did I see at the top of the mountain? This book is my answer to this question. Let's go for a hike.

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