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[you still can send me stuff, but... I really have not too much time at the moment, so it will take an eternity (and I'm unfortunately not exaggerating.) I'm really sorry.]
In this book I will comment on your OCs and stories, try to give tips and will give them (the OCs, not the tips) a cryptic rating based on nothing but madness and coincidence. And another rating that you might actually understand.
I do this as a hobby, because I can't find an open OC review book and now have decided that I will be the one who guides others to a treasure I cannot possess. Or something. ;P
You can send me everything: from OCs from your original work, over Joke MarySues and OCs from various fandoms as listed below to other things you send me regardless.
I know a lot about these fandoms:
- Lord of the Rings, The Hobbit (J.R.R. Tolkien; books, movies)
- Harry Potter (J.K. Rowling; books, a little bit movies)
- Jurassic Park/Jurassic World (Michael Crichton; books, movies)
I know a little/less about these fandoms:
- Sherlock (Sir Arthur Conan Doyle; books)
- A Hitchhikers guide to the Galaxy (Douglas Adams; books)
- Inkheart/-blood/-death (Cornelia Funke; books)
- Percy Jackson (Rick Riordan; books)
And some others I forgot. Yes I live behind the moon and know basically nothing about modern pop-/geek-culture, but you can send me everything, I will try to understand it.
What exactly I need, you will see in the first chapter, and after that it's up to you what happens in this book.
Also, if I've got time I will draw your characters based on what you tell me about them. :D
[I'm sorry if I make slight grammar/wording mistakes, English isn't my native language, but I try my best. If you find mistakes, please point them out in the comments and I will look how I can make it better. Thank you (: ]
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