Trapped
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there was a little girl named Charlie, she lived with her mom until the age of 11 years old, Fred: wasn't a bad man he had always been there for his sister Carmen he always helped her when she had to work and had nobody to leave Charlie with. Carmen: wasn't rich and didn't have a lot of stuff but she always made sure Charlie had clothing, food, place to sleep, drinks and everything she ever wanted she'd only occasionally buy herself clothing for her job. Charlie: She had just turned 11 june 30th 2023 she was a sweet girl with many loveable friends but that all changed when she left to live with her uncle Fred she was beautiful and nice she always helped her momma around the house because Carmen always bought Charlie things and Charlie felt terrible Charlie was upset when she saw what had happened to her mom, she was terrified of everything even her own family because she didn't know who to trust because of what had happened
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This is a redone, more realistic, more detailed, more writing experienced version of "Her Favorite Book" I wrote that story in 2021, I'm pretty sure, and I was less experienced than I was compared to now. Looking back at the story, I realized I could have offended certain people with my depictions of the abuse in the Rosa household, as well as her relationship with Charlie, and how she seems to not care as much about him as an older sibling, especially a protective one, would act. All of these problems are going to be fixed and all the chapters will be edited. I would also like to make it clear, I might change a couple things in the book itself, like, for example, I'm changing Alex(Ryder's younger brother) into a little girl who only speaks Spanish, and her name is Allie. Also, Ryders household life before Stella(Why his mom works so much, why his dad isn't in his life, etc) will be written in more detail than before. If I offended anyone in the original version of this story, I deeply apologize. Now, to those certain people that like the original story, I won't be taking it down, as it was and still is a big growing opportunity for my writing career as of now.

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