Beginners Luck
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Last published Sun, Sep 10, 2023
"Do you know what it's like to be trapped in your dreams? Time slowed as you watch everyone you've ever known, everyone you could know, everyone who exists die? I see their future's when I sleep, and I don't know if their real. Not until they actually happen."
CT-4364, known as "Lucky" was different from most clones. Him and his batchmates, all from the Celestial Squad, looked different from the rest of their brothers. They were unique misfits, mutations, defective clones. Despite the tauntings of others, and infuriating kaminoans running tests, Lucky was always the positive one. That is, until his squad is killed by a traitor soon after they graduate. He becomes cold and calculating, unnerving to others. He is brought back to Kamino to be part of the Domino Squad, the only clones who seemed to accept him and his deceased batchmates. Watch as he traverses the galaxy, learning secrets, uncovering deceptions, lies, and mutations that go beyond his unique eyes...
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