Short Stories of a Fiction Writer(Rough Draft)

This is a short story for my fiction writing class. It may not be very good and I have a lot to work on but I would love some input on what I can do to improve! I have a short amount of time and such so please read to your convenience and help me improve! Thankies to all and shoot me a message if you have a more in depth analysis on the story and would like to ask me about it cause I'd love to clear any confusion there might be in this. Yet again, this is for my fiction college class and would like all help and please no one copy.

Words for Words,
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