"Third Person Writing" Test Chapters
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Last published Mon, Oct 20, 2025
These are test chapters that will help me practice abandoning the script-style third person angle I prefer to write with.
I invite any and everyone to read it, and as I'm still rather unfamiliar with this sort of writing, any tips or tricks will be appreciated. There will be scattered updates. Thanks for reading.
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