Beneath the Stars
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Complete Wed, Mar 11, 2015<5 mins
This poem is meant to be from the point of view of someone who has recently been dumped, and has basically been left with no explanation, and they begin to realise that they can move on and they do not need another person to complete them. The poem is quite short, but i hope it portrays what i have written above.
This is a poem i have written for my college graded unit, i don't usually write poems so i have no idea if i have done this properly or if it is any good, but if i received some feedback positive or negative that would be great :)
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