Oh! What a kiss!
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So I finished watching Oh! My Emperor today and I'm not going to lie, those kisses were very disappointing. Especially the final kiss, when Fei Fei is about to leave. It's meant to be intense, romantic, passionate and emotional but it wasn't that at all because they were dead fish lip pressing😭 So I'm going to rewrite that scene. There wasn't much dialogue but I will try to use as much as the original dialogue as I can remember. But inevitably, it will not be the exact same. I hope all the Oh! My Emperor fans enjoy this :) also, I'm no writing genius but I really wanted to do it so I hope this is acceptable
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