My Secret Life

My Secret Life

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This is a three page story i did for english, if it sounds good i'm thinking of extending the plot to fit a longer chapertized book, but id like feedback. It's about this girl named Elise who is secretly a assassin for the government, her childhood enemy comes back into her life after a couple years of freedom, after leading a group of thugs right to her family, she has to try and protect them from danger, and risk her secret coming out. A little bit of the book >>> 'Why am I so stupid?! How could I lead them right to my family?' I paced frantically around my room, over thinking everything. I should have been more careful, put more thought into my actions. I should have parked further away. UGGH!!!!! What's the point in even thinking about it, its over and done with already. I threw a book at the wall, smashing a dent above my vanity. Damn...now i have another thing to fix, just GREAT! 'Yesterday everything was completely fine, i went to school, kept my head down, and blended in. Now i'm pretty sure my family is going to be murdered', I muttered aloud. My mind kept thinking, not giving me break to get a deep breath, and think up a fool proof plan. I was interrupted by a muffled noise outside my window. I pulled my knife from under my bed. Sliding over the wall next to my window, i peered around the corner.
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An angel and a rebel. A scholarship girl and a playgirl. When their worlds collide, sparks fly-and nothing will ever be the same. When Enid Jones-straight-A student and the perfect Islamic daughter-earns a scholarship to the prestigious Montrose Academy, she believes her life is finally falling into place. Her plan is simple: keep her head down, ace her classes, secure a scholarship to Yale, work a side job, and one day gain full custody of her younger sister from their abusive father. But trouble has other plans for Enid... and its name is Olivia Grayson. Carefree, rebellious, and notorious for breaking hearts, Olivia is Montrose Academy's golden girl. With her comes the infamous Golden Four, and a whirlwind of chaos Enid wants no part of. At least, that's what she tells herself. Because Olivia isn't just interested in Enid-she's made it her mission to strip away the saintly image everyone sees and uncover the fire hidden beneath. But what if it's Olivia's carefully crafted "bad girl" façade that begins to crumble first... all because of a certain brunette who was never supposed to matter? ๑ "After what you and your stupid friends did to me, isn't it enough? Do you really have to rub it in my face?" I snapped, my voice shaking with fury. Olivia just smirked, stepping closer until her warm minty breath fanned against my lips. My pulse went wild, betraying me. "I'm only just getting started, angel," she whispered in that husky voice of hers. "And I'll stop... the moment I hear you moan my name." ๑ An angel and a rebel. A scholarship girl and a playgirl. Can love survive when it's least expected-or will it destroy them both?

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