My Secret Life

My Secret Life

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This is a three page story i did for english, if it sounds good i'm thinking of extending the plot to fit a longer chapertized book, but id like feedback. It's about this girl named Elise who is secretly a assassin for the government, her childhood enemy comes back into her life after a couple years of freedom, after leading a group of thugs right to her family, she has to try and protect them from danger, and risk her secret coming out. A little bit of the book >>> 'Why am I so stupid?! How could I lead them right to my family?' I paced frantically around my room, over thinking everything. I should have been more careful, put more thought into my actions. I should have parked further away. UGGH!!!!! What's the point in even thinking about it, its over and done with already. I threw a book at the wall, smashing a dent above my vanity. Damn...now i have another thing to fix, just GREAT! 'Yesterday everything was completely fine, i went to school, kept my head down, and blended in. Now i'm pretty sure my family is going to be murdered', I muttered aloud. My mind kept thinking, not giving me break to get a deep breath, and think up a fool proof plan. I was interrupted by a muffled noise outside my window. I pulled my knife from under my bed. Sliding over the wall next to my window, i peered around the corner.
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Okay so this story is probably from 2018. It's not good and it's written like a dialog because my initial plan was to draw it. But I'm kinnda too lazy for that. A redhaired girl is lying on the ground, wounded. The world around her is being destroyed. Everything around her is exploding. AKANE: So this is the cause of my actions? Did I train and fought all my life just for this? She looks on her right. On the ground there's a glowing rock, radiating its magic. Tears start falling down her face. AKANE: It's all my fault. ''AKANE'': Pathetic girl. All my life I was hidding my emotions... They taught me to do so. And now, tears. Ha! Pathetic. The whole universe will cease to exist because of me... Because of my emotions, because of them... Because of him. I'm no assassin. I'm weak. And just like that, I'll die. You must be confused. Don't worry, I'll take you to the beginning, where it all started.

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