My Secret Life

My Secret Life

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This is a three page story i did for english, if it sounds good i'm thinking of extending the plot to fit a longer chapertized book, but id like feedback. It's about this girl named Elise who is secretly a assassin for the government, her childhood enemy comes back into her life after a couple years of freedom, after leading a group of thugs right to her family, she has to try and protect them from danger, and risk her secret coming out. A little bit of the book >>> 'Why am I so stupid?! How could I lead them right to my family?' I paced frantically around my room, over thinking everything. I should have been more careful, put more thought into my actions. I should have parked further away. UGGH!!!!! What's the point in even thinking about it, its over and done with already. I threw a book at the wall, smashing a dent above my vanity. Damn...now i have another thing to fix, just GREAT! 'Yesterday everything was completely fine, i went to school, kept my head down, and blended in. Now i'm pretty sure my family is going to be murdered', I muttered aloud. My mind kept thinking, not giving me break to get a deep breath, and think up a fool proof plan. I was interrupted by a muffled noise outside my window. I pulled my knife from under my bed. Sliding over the wall next to my window, i peered around the corner.
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The Job

"I need your help Emma," I say softly "Why should I help you James," she spat," you left me dilshit! Go ask someone else." She stuck her nose up in the air like a kid, making a small chuckle rise from my throat. I get up and tap the butt of my gun on her shoulder. She flinches a bit, struggling against the ropes binding her. "I'm in a bit of a pickle Em," I say slowly walking around to meet her face," you know you're the only one that can help me." Her hazel eyes shone with anger and pain. The pain I caused. I left her for a reason, now I'm dragging her back into my life. But I don't have a choice. This is an unconventional spy "novel". • Some language. • Some adult themes but not much. (Keep in mind, its a 17yr wiring this.)

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