The Lonely God
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Last published Thu, Mar 12, 2015
An extended metaphor about emotions and psychology.
I am writing this under an appreciable mental strain. I cannot comprehend any longer, I don't wish to, so I'll sink into arrogance and keep playing it off.
I find that I convey my thoughts much more directly and much more efficiently if I stray from any particular rhyme scheme. I often find that mystery follows broad rhymes, and mystery is not deep, it is not even superficial so let's stray from it in this moment, I'll go back to that when I'm to tired to keep going forward.
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