The Hooded Man
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Last published Thu, Mar 12, 2015
The detective rushed back and stopped at the doorway. “Could you, by any chance, describe him for me?” She asked. “It’s impediment to our case.”
I scrunched up my nose, thinking. “He was wearing a black trench coat and ski mask…and he had a hood covering his head.” She went pale.
“A hood?” I nodded. “Ms. Reed,” she said slowly, her voice shaking. “ You’re lucky to be alive.”
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