SPECTRE
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Specter:
This is a story I've been working on for awhile. I've seen many people talk about how bad their writing is. This just makes me cringe because they say this when they're just on their first draft. I decided to post the first draft of my story called Specter. This is purely just to give writers and idea what a first draft looks like. A confidence booster. Something to compare your writing to. The best writer never wrote a master piece on the first go.
When you read this you'll say, this is good but needs to be worked on more.
WARNING CONTAINS:
Dead plot points that go nowhere,
Cringe worthy dialogue,
Characters that are not fleshed out,
Weak characters,
A rushed ending,
A weak villain,
Thin plot that has little meat
Scenes that make you say, "Srsly?"
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