Birthright (Book 1 of The Paladin)
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  • Reads 133
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  • Parts 15
  • Time 1h 45m
Ongoing, First published Jul 27, 2023
Mature
Birthright is a captivating fantasy novel that follows the journey of Edmund, a former soldier turned ranch hand, as he embarks on a new life after leaving his past behind. Set in the fictional land of Cairne, the story unfolds as he discovers an orphan boy named Luca and his mysterious divine origin. Together, they venture to find Luca's destiny and the truth about Edmund's past.

This will be the 1st Draft of the story.
Your criticisms are all welcome, both good and bad (but i'd appreciate it if you won't insult me)

If there will be plot holes and inconsistencies, it is understandable.

My current goal is to finish writing the entire book first.
Then patch holes on the 2nd draft.
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