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Complete, First published Jul 28, 2023
For one to inhabit oddities that are truly beyond normalcy, the town has been surprisingly peaceful for many centuries. However, behind the tranquility that seemed to encase the place, there lie intense rules that are forever ingrained by all townsfolk within their hearts and mind.

Though it is not the town itself that was odd; but the territory just next to them. Vast and eerie, full of creatures of the unknown, and home to a being so powerful who was feared by all and remembered even by the youngest of children there was. The forest is not to be disturbed.

The rules were simple. No one is to be allowed to enter, even taking a daring mere inch of a step, in the forest.

NO. ENTRY.

This is what has been placed when people take sightings of the large and wide forest. A warning that implies extreme danger due to the number of signs there are in one area.

For there is a creature that lies beyond the forest. So dangerous and so terrifying, it could scorch the world with its flames.

It's not a dragon.

It's not a beastly monster.

Not even a giant or a devil.

But a god.

A sun god.

And the sun god's abode was the forest. And he is there for a reason.
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