The Big Blue Book of Embarassment

So, this isn't a book (Yet). This is a script I wrote for drama class. I just would like to get some feed back on it please? Thank you my lovelies. And who knows? If y'all like it, I'll convert it into a mini story!
(It's really short right now. But, yeah, it's about insecurities and life and love and yeah. Quite cliche)

J.<3