When I let you go
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Last published Thu, Sep 21, 2023
A first ever short story that I've written recently.
A melancholic romance story about two person who realized that they are perfect to each other. Nizelle Naomi Alfircis is living in darkness, she didn't think twice when she decided to end her life but then a Man stopped her from being fall down her wrong decision. How will she handle every chapters of her life knowing she already have someone's shoulder to lean on? Will she continue on living the life she used to be? or just escape the nightmare she doesn't deserve?
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