Breedlove Manor

Copywrite of Ghostwriter Phoenix 2023. Pen name. Aka RobbinBott7. Not yet grammar checked, spelling errors may be pressant, PLEASE Don't Steal and claim as your work. All rights, characters, locations and otherwise within are mine and I claim them. A revised version dear reader. Would you read this? Does it seem like something you would read. This this better or was it better the first time? Welcomed helpful comments hints, tricks, suggestions or highlights or point out where I may need to improve thank you.

Intro

Welcome to Breedlove Manor. I am the author, writing a vampire novel about you, Beatrice Mathia Breedlove, and your manor.

My story will include the people you meet and those who serve you, as well as the ruins and relics and those within your family and either friends or supposed foes of those lives of you and others like you. You are a Countess and a recantly turned Vampire who has a relationship with a dhampir named Cain, who could be either a friend or foe. You also have siblings who may or may not live in the manor or in other cities, towns, and major locations within the story and its surroundings. The manor was passed down to you from your distant relative, and previously belonged to your birth mother's family. She loved and cared for her family with patience and kindness.

Despite being a vampire, you are not a monster. Until today, you have never encountered another human or vampire. You were born as a human in a forest that is now part of the Breedlove Manor estate and later found out who turned you." A updated family secert of your not close aunt is in a family chests and history with dairies, black and white photos, and family jewels and other items belong to your manor and the Breedlove family name.

Within some chapters I have revised to outline as so you the reader will have better flow of details of what is going on, I will edit other chapters later this Sunday coming.