Desdemona Manor

This is a story I've been thinking about creating for a while now, I have a whole Google slide I created just for story planning and inspiration. I will post parts of my story as I draft and edit them. Just a warning, it's not perfect or exactly how I want it to be as my only proofreading is me and AI (Grammarly).

Khayali Desdemona is 16 years old and a junior in high school. She lives in an abusive home in the corner of a bustling city. She often spends her time daydreaming and avoiding her problems. Eventually, they catch up to her one day when she's caught sleeping in class and her grades fail. Her mother decides to send her away for reform at her wealthy grandparent's house in a rural part of the world. During her few months there, she meets a girl named Maya Frances. She's a beautiful 17-year-old girl with long golden hair who seems to know a lot about the magical world living inside the large thicket of woods surrounding the manor. Khayali spends lots of time with Maya and meets the creatures of this strange dimension, as well as forming a strong bond with Maya herself. But who is Maya really and what is truly going on in the magical realm beyond the trees? And why is it that she only appears from the forest, and when Khayali needs her most?