Lost Moon: REWRITE
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Ongoing, First published Aug 08, 2023
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This is an EternalKimFlame original. 
"Don't abuse my charity! You may not be pure bred, but you are Omega nonetheless. Know your place!" His snap made me flinch. But I didn't break eye contact, glaring right back at him.

"If you ever want the title of Alpha, you'll learn to control your temper."

He reached a hand out as if to grasp my face. But he stopped, curling his fingers into a fist as he pointed at me.

"Don't. Tell me what to do."

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Moon is a girl, half werewolf, half human. Her father an Omega. But when she defends her father against the Alpha's Son, things get interesting. 

Instead of harming her as well as her father, he invites her as a guest to the Alpha's House. Is this a trick? Some sort of elaborate trap? All Moon knows is that it started when Jacob saw her white hair. This is a EternalKimFlame original. This book will not be posted/published anywhere but wattpad.

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1k followers. Wow, I cannot thank you all, enough for taking an interest in my little space, and stories. This is an EternalKimFlame original. This book will Not be published anywhere but Wattpad.

I'm not sure how many of you really wanted this rewrite, but I certainly did. I've been itching to show it to all of you ever since I finished the last chapter! Bit of a warning to those who've read the original. I did change the story. So now it makes sense. Have fun!

Disclaimer: None of the songs are mine, their links are posted in the chapters.

Warning: This Book contains mild Harrassment, and Assault.
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15 parts Complete Mature

Scarlet Montgomery lived her life as the pack slave. She was left Omega after her parents ditched her to become rogues. She is constantly tormented not only by the other pack members but by the Alpha himself. When she meets her mate on her eighteenth birthday, things take an unexpected turn that seem to leave her life in a downward spiral. She becomes more and more defeated with each awful instance sent her way. Will she be able to escape or will she be eaten alive by the wolves that she was thrown to? ************ Trigger warning! There is graphic content, abuse, violence, sexual violence, strong language...etc. If you can't handle any of those things, shy away from the book! Thank you ************ Excerpt: "You know, wouldn't it be fucked up if we were mates?" My face scrunched up, not only in disgust but worry about where he was going with his question. It would be the worst thing that I could imagine. There was a chance that if we were mates that he would lighten up and become the loving mate the moon goddess would have intended but that was a very slim chance. "Do you know what I would do if we were mates?" I shook my head; I didn't just mean it as I didn't know but I didn't want to know. He would probably reject me in the worst possible way he could think of. Or he would use the bond against me. I was already his slave but maybe there was something else that he could do that my innocent mind just couldn't conjure because I wasn't anything like him. I held my humanity close to me as if it would save me in the long run. I refused to be anything like my tormentors and I kept as true to myself as I could. He turned his body towards mine and I could see he was smirking at me but I got a bad feeling. "I would fuck you as hard as I possibly could and then I would kill you. You don't deserve to be a part of this pack but we need slaves just like any other. You truly disgust me and I hope that whoever your mate is rejects you. You're a sorry excuse for a she-wolf."