Lost Moon: REWRITE
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EternalKimFlame
Ongoing, First published Aug 08, 2023
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This is an EternalKimFlame original. 
"Don't abuse my charity! You may not be pure bred, but you are Omega nonetheless. Know your place!" His snap made me flinch. But I didn't break eye contact, glaring right back at him.

"If you ever want the title of Alpha, you'll learn to control your temper."

He reached a hand out as if to grasp my face. But he stopped, curling his fingers into a fist as he pointed at me.

"Don't. Tell me what to do."

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Moon is a girl, half werewolf, half human. Her father an Omega. But when she defends her father against the Alpha's Son, things get interesting. 

Instead of harming her as well as her father, he invites her as a guest to the Alpha's House. Is this a trick? Some sort of elaborate trap? All Moon knows is that it started when Jacob saw her white hair. This is a EternalKimFlame original. This book will not be posted/published anywhere but wattpad.

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1k followers. Wow, I cannot thank you all, enough for taking an interest in my little space, and stories. This is an EternalKimFlame original. This book will Not be published anywhere but Wattpad.

I'm not sure how many of you really wanted this rewrite, but I certainly did. I've been itching to show it to all of you ever since I finished the last chapter! Bit of a warning to those who've read the original. I did change the story. So now it makes sense. Have fun!

Disclaimer: None of the songs are mine, their links are posted in the chapters.

Warning: This Book contains mild Harrassment, and Assault.
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