Tell Me When it Hurts
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*Original Story Re-Written*
"Tell Me When it Hurts,"
Harry Styles is one of the most known Dominates of this time, however, his fame has turned to infamy after one of his fights with a submissive ended with a restraining order. In an attempt to clear his name and take another shot, pun intended, at love he signed his life away with one rule to his new submissive, Louis -
"I need you to tell me when it hurts,"
"It-it hurts,"
A Larry fan-fic unlike any other, re-wrote at 10K votes - the original is linked in the first chapter :) Happy reading! - Emma :)
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