Tell Me When it Hurts
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  • Parts 28
  • Time 3h 23m
  • Reads 436,663
  • Votes 11,864
  • Parts 28
  • Time 3h 23m
Complete, First published Mar 14, 2015
Mature
*Original Story Re-Written*
"Tell Me When it Hurts," 
Harry Styles is one of the most known Dominates of this time, however, his fame has turned to infamy after one of his fights with a submissive ended with a restraining order. In an attempt to clear his name and take another shot, pun intended, at love he signed his life away with one rule to his new submissive, Louis - 
"I need you to tell me when it hurts,"
"It-it hurts,"

A Larry fan-fic unlike any other, re-wrote at 10K votes - the original is linked in the first chapter :) Happy reading! - Emma :)
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YOU'RE MINE {L.S} BDSM MPREG UNDER HUGE EDITING

112 parts Complete Mature

Louis is looking for a new Dom, but no one wants him, from his past record, his far too demanding. Harrys looking for a new sub, but doesn't seem to find one. Until.. Read to find out. If you don't like or understand BDSM don't read the book. THIS BOOK IS FINALY FINISHED & there will be errors as I wrote this when I was younger, I'm nearly 18 and do write better now honestly I hate the way this book was written, so I've decided to leave it as it is even though it's pretty bad. Do NOT comment anything rude. Also mentions of rape, abuse, suicide & self harm, read at your own risk!