Polygon Laboratories

First of all, this is the first story I write, I hope you all like it and if you can give me tips I'll gladly take them. (Important, I'll probably change hings along the story so this description might not be story accurate)
This is the story of a young Flowerian (a humanoid plant) who got lost in the woods during a hunt with the people of his village, his name is Octavio, Octavio then wandered in the woods trying to find his people or a way back to his village, on his way he finds a kind human that brings him in his small lab where he take care of him. Many years later Octavio will leave the little laboratory to build his own that will serve as a guild as well. Octavio will meet many people from different races. there are also notes of the narrator, i think it adds some life in the narrating.