The Comandante's Command
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Last published Thu, Jul 25, 2024
This is the first story that i upload. This is not done yet, I'm just busy so I'll try my best to update it quickly and pls support me since it was my first time to share to you what I've imagine.
Hope you enjoy reading this story about the girl unexpectedly enrolled to the university that she didn't know she's belonged. She will meet the different kind of person and different type of guy that can make her fall in love. But her attention caught the guy called Comandante.
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